" Violent delights have violent ends. And in their triumph die, like fire and powder, which as they kiss consume. "-William Shakespeare, Romeo and Juliet, 2.3 (New Moon)

Sunday, February 14, 2010

THRILLER

I must confess i didn’t like Coco but Susan and Joy were acting so lovely throughout her that i understood, i had to learn how to live with her. One day Coco and i were in the garden. Susan and Joy were inside the house, they were trying to do Susan’s complicated homework. In the garden, Coco was trying to play with me but i choose to play alone. I didn’t need her to have fun. The garden was big and there were colourful toys for me to play. I started to chase the little, red ball. Suddenly i realised that the garden door was opened. I knew I had better stay in the garden for my own sake but I really wondered the outside. Nearly, since i was born i had been living in this house and i hadnt seen the outside. I made an elegant plan quickly. I couldn’t dare to go by myself and i decided to take Coco with me When i told the plan to her, she got very excited. We began to move so slowly. Nearly five minutes later we were in the street. It was so crowded that we were under shock. There were many cars. Some of them were little some of them were big. Each of them had different colour and shape and they were really very fast. Even though we were both scared, we were happy at the same time becouse for the first time in our lives, we were by ourselves. For two or three hours we walked in the huge, crowded streets. The weather was getting darker. Coco was smiling and she was talking about everything she saw. She started to annoy me and i said her to shut up. She knew i didn’t like her but she was still trying to get on well with me. While i was thinking about this, suddenly we heard a barking. We were in a little street and we couldn’t understand where the sound was coming. Both Coco and I were panting. In the darkness I saw a shadow. It was belong to a huge, black stray dog. While he was looking at us, his mouth was watering. He barked loudly again. He started to get closer to Coco. I understood that he was planing an attack. Coco was looking at me with her big eyes. I saw fear in them. That moment iI noticed that I care about her. Yes I didn’t like her but i couldn’t stand watching her while someone’s hurting her. Abruptly stray dog jumped on Coco. With a quick move I reached Coco before him. I cought her from her soft, white nape. While running from dog, I could feel his hot breath on my nape. I ran so quickly that I couldn’t see Coco’s bloody wounds. They were so deep that she was moaning with pain. One hour later, thanks to my strong instict I found our house. When Joy and Marty saw us they screamed. There were both happiness and anxiety in their voice. Susan cried so much that her eyes were red. She hugged Coco. Even if I thought I didn’t like Coco, I realized that she was one of the biggest part of my life. I hate her voice and her sassiness but at the same time I love her white smooth fur and her loveableness. After this event I understood how precious she was and I treated her like a gentleman.

5 comments:

  1. Thanks for your comment, Büşra :D
    I enjoyed your -thrilling- "THRILLER" story,too. I can say that you have made up the rest of the story almost perfectly...
    But, actually, I didn't enjoy your comment you made on my story:p and I'm really beginning to wonder when you will give up attacking me so ironically and satirically...

    keep following me;)
    cheers(:

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  2. hi my dear friend Emir (:
    my comment was not personal, you should have understood it (: and I am not attacking you. you know I just like doing jokes to you I was not serious while doing that. dont be so sensitive :D
    I will follow you
    dears
    ;)

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  3. hi büşra,
    I know you are just kidding and I'm just kidding,too. You should know that if I were sensitive,in my blog I wouldn't have written how messy I was ;) moreover; knowingly that you would absolutely comment on my situation :)))

    YES YOU'RE RIGHT---
    MY FRIEND
    KEEP FOLLOWING ME...
    JUST FOLLOW THE QUALITY...
    YEAH THAT'S ME =)

    REGARDS....

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  4. very successful story from büşra..
    congratulation honey :)ı am looking forward to read your new stories.
    by the way, ı love you;)

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  5. dear Büşra,

    I liked your story.It was nice but it would have a different ending.Nevertheless,your blog is awesome.Congratulations :)

    cheers:)

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