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hi everyone
this week I visited some sites which are offered to us by our teacher..eslflow.com/AcademicWritng.html was the first one. you can find nearly every type of essays in here it's really useful. second one is bee online. it is like some kind of a diary. I think it was exciting to read them so that I can have informations about their daily or school life. you should visit them, too. hope you like it.
see you (:

2. week's post

this week, we got the miserable news from our teacher G.Gultekin. she didn't like our homeworks about opinion essay :( we'll write them again. this time I hope she likes it. we learned something new about blogs from Metin, I tried to use them. by the way in the reading class we read charles and learned how to catch clues from short stories, I really liked it. hope you enjoyed it too. see you all ... (:

THRILLER

I must confess i didn’t like Coco but Susan and Joy were acting so lovely throughout her that i understood, i had to learn how to live with her. One day Coco and i were in the garden. Susan and Joy were inside the house, they were trying to do Susan’s complicated homework. In the garden, Coco was trying to play with me but i choose to play alone. I didn’t need her to have fun. The garden was big and there were colourful toys for me to play. I started to chase the little, red ball. Suddenly i realised that the garden door was opened. I knew I had better stay in the garden for my own sake but I really wondered the outside. Nearly, since i was born i had been living in this house and i hadnt seen the outside. I made an elegant plan quickly. I couldn’t dare to go by myself and i decided to take Coco with me When i told the plan to her, she got very excited. We began to move so slowly. Nearly five minutes later we were in the street. It was so crowded that we were under shock. There were many cars. Some of them were little some of them were big. Each of them had different colour and shape and they were really very fast. Even though we were both scared, we were happy at the same time becouse for the first time in our lives, we were by ourselves. For two or three hours we walked in the huge, crowded streets. The weather was getting darker. Coco was smiling and she was talking about everything she saw. She started to annoy me and i said her to shut up. She knew i didn’t like her but she was still trying to get on well with me. While i was thinking about this, suddenly we heard a barking. We were in a little street and we couldn’t understand where the sound was coming. Both Coco and I were panting. In the darkness I saw a shadow. It was belong to a huge, black stray dog. While he was looking at us, his mouth was watering. He barked loudly again. He started to get closer to Coco. I understood that he was planing an attack. Coco was looking at me with her big eyes. I saw fear in them. That moment iI noticed that I care about her. Yes I didn’t like her but i couldn’t stand watching her while someone’s hurting her. Abruptly stray dog jumped on Coco. With a quick move I reached Coco before him. I cought her from her soft, white nape. While running from dog, I could feel his hot breath on my nape. I ran so quickly that I couldn’t see Coco’s bloody wounds. They were so deep that she was moaning with pain. One hour later, thanks to my strong instict I found our house. When Joy and Marty saw us they screamed. There were both happiness and anxiety in their voice. Susan cried so much that her eyes were red. She hugged Coco. Even if I thought I didn’t like Coco, I realized that she was one of the biggest part of my life. I hate her voice and her sassiness but at the same time I love her white smooth fur and her loveableness. After this event I understood how precious she was and I treated her like a gentleman.

First Post (:

With the beggining of the second term, we entered a thought schedule. this term, we'll try to connact on internet via blogs. Thanks to our reading and writing teacher Ms. Gultekin, we all created our own blogs. So that we can share our homeworks, ideas and other things we like. I think this is really beneficial. So I can see my classmates homeworks and can learnd their opinions. Besides, this week we learned how to write an opinion essay. I havent done my homework yet, but I think I got it and this type of essay, the most enjoyabe essay. see you on monday everyone, take care...